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Just a Random Poem

Post  Laura Buczynski on Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:13 pm

Okay so poetry isn't my forte and I haven't written ANY since govvie school XD

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The room is dark
It is empty, except
There is a girl
Standing in the center,
Knowing she is alone.

Her voice carries
Throughout the room
Even though
The only people who hear
Are not real.

It soothes her pain
To believe
Someone else is there,
But in the end
She is alone.

I am alone.

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Like I said give me slack XD I feel like it's really bad, but it's late at night and this. . . . . thing popped out of my head. XD
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Post  null on Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:03 pm

haha I love how you called your poem a thing xD

yeah... I'm pretty sure mamie would die if she read this, but at least you writing... right?

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Post  Laura Buczynski on Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:40 pm

Yeahhhhhh rereading this just made me want to go -facepalm- XD

I need to get back into writing more often X___X
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Post  null on Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:00 pm

you are so not the only one x________________________X I've been editing that last poem I posted for who knows how long, and I'm STILL not satisfied. do you think there are ever poems that are just not meant to be? like, they're born, and then I find I it only has a few months to live... and with a lot of surgery involved?

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