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Super Busy Hospital

Post  Jessica Swanson on Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:37 pm

“I like video games, but they are very violent. I want to create a video game in which you have to help all the characters who have died in the other games.” – Demetri Martin

This man doesn’t
have any arms, but it’s
okay. The
blood is just a
color. It is
okay.

There’s a thing
above the doc
tor’s head, if he’ll
just pull it down.
One-up. You’ll
survive.

Headshot,
tomahawk, put the
pieces back to
gether, there’s a
limb.

Zombies crossing. They
won’t bleed but they
can die. Sniper,
stab. Hey, watch
out man.
It’s too

late. Terminate
d. My heart floats, if
it gets stabbed
I will spawn again.
Healed.

Mario fell off
a stack of crates.
Reached too far
for a star and Peach
came tumbling after.
Fix them, Doctor, ice
on their

bruises. Purple and
black and blood and
it is okay. It’s just
a color.



Thoughts? Critiques? Still a WIP.
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Re: Super Busy Hospital

Post  null on Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:49 am

I love the repetition of 'It's okay' and 'it's just a colour' =] but I really think we could have a clearer idea of what's going on here

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