Super Busy Hospital
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Super Busy Hospital
“I like video games, but they are very violent. I want to create a video game in which you have to help all the characters who have died in the other games.” – Demetri Martin
This man doesn’t
have any arms, but it’s
okay. The
blood is just a
color. It is
okay.
There’s a thing
above the doc
tor’s head, if he’ll
just pull it down.
One-up. You’ll
survive.
Headshot,
tomahawk, put the
pieces back to
gether, there’s a
limb.
Zombies crossing. They
won’t bleed but they
can die. Sniper,
stab. Hey, watch
out man. It’s too
late. Terminate
d. My heart floats, if
it gets stabbed
I will spawn again.
Healed.
Mario fell off
a stack of crates.
Reached too far
for a star and Peach
came tumbling after.
Fix them, Doctor, ice
on their
bruises. Purple and
black and blood and
it is okay. It’s just
a color.
Thoughts? Critiques? Still a WIP.
This man doesn’t
have any arms, but it’s
okay. The
blood is just a
color. It is
okay.
There’s a thing
above the doc
tor’s head, if he’ll
just pull it down.
One-up. You’ll
survive.
Headshot,
tomahawk, put the
pieces back to
gether, there’s a
limb.
Zombies crossing. They
won’t bleed but they
can die. Sniper,
stab. Hey, watch
out man. It’s too
late. Terminate
d. My heart floats, if
it gets stabbed
I will spawn again.
Healed.
Mario fell off
a stack of crates.
Reached too far
for a star and Peach
came tumbling after.
Fix them, Doctor, ice
on their
bruises. Purple and
black and blood and
it is okay. It’s just
a color.
Thoughts? Critiques? Still a WIP.
Jessica Swanson- Posts : 31
Join date : 2010-07-23
Age : 27
Location : Summerville, South Carolina
Re: Super Busy Hospital
I love the repetition of 'It's okay' and 'it's just a colour' =] but I really think we could have a clearer idea of what's going on here
null- Posts : 88
Join date : 2010-07-23
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