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Post  Oh nein. on Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:48 am

[deleted] I totally almost misspelled "deleted"



This was...such a nightmare.


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Post  null on Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:49 pm

omgsdlagf aksldfj I love it! Very Happy you told it so well, and just like either of the characters would have told it. so realistic =D and you had me bursting out laughing at the anticlimax ><

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Post  . on Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:21 pm

I thought it was so good! i loved where he said he went home and watched Friends reruns with his cat. that was definitely my favorite line! It was also really uniquely written (in a good way).

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Post  unused on Mon Aug 29, 2011 6:09 pm

Hahah awesome! I loved the "be'cha your ass." Don't ask me why. Also loved the POV...not read many things like it. Ever. Which I lurve! Hmmmm....trying to think of some constructive criticism....hmmmm....oh. White padded room didn't do it for me, although I loved everything that happened in it. And it's all opinion (isn't life?) Good title, too(:
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Post  unknown on Sat Sep 10, 2011 4:17 pm

this cracked me up! I even love how you added (explicit) in the title. I really loved the characters!

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