Medical Examiner
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Medical Examiner
Jessica Swanson Wed Aug 03, 2011 8:37 am
First draft, please tell me what you think!
She works like erosion,
meticulous and discriminate
wait for the forensic light bulb to
flash on
-off again.
on and off again a
flickering
a switch like a finger,
she flicks it up the sound of it
echoes.
She works like erosion,
meticulous and discriminate
wait for the forensic light bulb to
flash on
-off again.
on and off again a
flickering
a switch like a finger,
she flicks it up the sound of it
echoes.
Last edited by Jessica Swanson on Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:00 am; edited 1 time in total
Jessica Swanson- Posts : 31
Join date : 2010-07-23
Age : 27
Location : Summerville, South Carolina
Re: Medical Examiner
null Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:34 am
I love the rhythm! but what's the [b] at the end?
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Re: Medical Examiner
Jessica Swanson Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:01 am
Haha, didn't see that. That must've happened when I copy/pasted here, not part of the poem. Thanks for catching it.
Jessica Swanson- Posts : 31
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Location : Summerville, South Carolina
Re: Medical Examiner
unknown Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:24 am
I like it, it's unique I mean how many poems about a medical exaimener are there out there? I think you should see where you can take this poem because I feel like you've set up a lot of potential =D sorry really wanted to edit and missing you guys!!! 
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