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[deleted] I totally almost misspelled "deleted"
This was...such a nightmare.
This was...such a nightmare.
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Oh nein.- Posts : 1
Join date : 2011-08-09
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omgsdlagf aksldfj I love it! you told it so well, and just like either of the characters would have told it. so realistic =D and you had me bursting out laughing at the anticlimax ><
null- Posts : 88
Join date : 2010-07-23
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I thought it was so good! i loved where he said he went home and watched Friends reruns with his cat. that was definitely my favorite line! It was also really uniquely written (in a good way).
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Age : 27
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Hahah awesome! I loved the "be'cha your ass." Don't ask me why. Also loved the POV...not read many things like it. Ever. Which I lurve! Hmmmm....trying to think of some constructive criticism....hmmmm....oh. White padded room didn't do it for me, although I loved everything that happened in it. And it's all opinion (isn't life?) Good title, too(:
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this cracked me up! I even love how you added (explicit) in the title. I really loved the characters!
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