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null Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:42 pm
this one's a bit hard to follow... I'd like to see some more unity here, but I like what you've got so far, especially
'go to the woods
where I stripped from my jeans
and left them twisted in wire.'
and
'bite Emily’s foot.
bite a Jew’s foot.
bite a German’s foot.'
'go to the woods
where I stripped from my jeans
and left them twisted in wire.'
and
'bite Emily’s foot.
bite a Jew’s foot.
bite a German’s foot.'
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