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mckky, i love it!!! its absolutely fantastic and screams you. i love the word grander, but something tells me that mamie would hate it lol. i think you should use it as an entry piece 
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null Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:25 pm
yeah, I also have the feeling she'd shun the word brilliant as well x] but I do have some new ideas for this poem... it's gotta lot of editing and revising left for me to do x_X but I think it might just be worth it 
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post the new draft as another topic so i can read both and see how awesome it is
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