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omg. this poem. this poem right here. I love it. wow, it's so simple and sweet and genius, it's infuriating. the images of the windows, and the shower, and a little girl trying to bathe in a sink, are so strong, as well as the breaking of teal, like cracking paint, is how I imagined. this reminds me a lot of the style of Charles Bukowski, but it has a lot more class, if that makes sense
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haha i love you so so much. i actually modeled this style after his style
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gosh chelsea just reading your stuff makes me think
CRAZY CHILD WHY HAVE I NOT BEEN WRITING AS MUCH!
b/c your stuff is so amazing.
all of y'alls is.
gosh highschool is sucking the creativity out of me.
CRAZY CHILD WHY HAVE I NOT BEEN WRITING AS MUCH!
b/c your stuff is so amazing.
all of y'alls is.
gosh highschool is sucking the creativity out of me.
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well you are just amazing! great job! and keep working. =)
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